Please you are making me feel bad now...
If I may just offer some humble advice- I'm not exactly a great writer but please consider this one:
Characters such as Lucas, the gods, even the magic girls... They all exist as being very powerful and are our heavy hitters in a story much like the wish stone. They are hammer characters that tend to exist to fix things. There is a reason goku can't go fight the bad guy straight away- it would end really fast.
I just hope to create a little drama before its all resolved... It's not that I hate Lucas being involved. I actually thought it interesting that she has unintentionally strengthened a stigma the normal humans have to the changed- it just concerns me that she resolves things so quickly it ends the yarn.
You can still add to it.
Incidentally I hope I havnt jumped too far ahead with this chapter. I feared nothingsp might have something to add but there was no way to know and suddenly my block in my head cleared and I typed like I was possessed.
