I liked the premise of the original chapter but I didn’t like how Sarah’s feelings were being set up to be thrown away so carelessly. I set up this alternate take on the chapter to steer the story in an alternate direction. Much praise and credit to the author dakhan for the original chapter that this alternate is nearly a carbon copy of with slight changes for new inspiration.
"Hmm, not right away, Karyn. I want to give this a try for a day at least, because I have, like, so many fun memories of us as best girlfriends. I'm going to go finish getting ready for school, be right back!" the new Jon said in her sweet, bubbly voice and then bounced off to her room.
"We're both girls now Jon, I don't need to wait outside anymore," Karyn replied, and followed her into the bedroom.
Jon put on her make-up hesitantly at first, but then she relaxed and let her body's physical memory take over and it became easier. She accessorized with some small earrings and a necklace.
"OK, just let me go to the bathroom Karyn and we can head out!"
As soon as Jon closed the bathroom door, Karyn grabbed the wishing stone from the dresser where Jon had left it. She decided to make a few more wishes, quietly so Jon couldn't hear.
"First, since Jon is not a girl's name, I wish Joan would be her new nickname that only I called her and her real name is Joanna for as long as she remains female. Second, I wish that Joanna is totally willing to defer to me when making wishes with the stone, and would not make any wish without getting my approval first. Third, I wish that Sarah was also in love with Joanna, and will now realize that she had been coming on to me only so she could get close to her true love Joanna. I wish that she would stop bugging me, even if she still loves me, and turn her attentions toward Joanna instead. I wish that Joanna is a closeted lipstick lesbian and while she secretly enjoys Sarah’s flirting, she’s very embarrassed by it whenever it happens in public. Finally, I wish that in an attempt to get Sarah to quit coming on to her in public and try to calm down her secret lover’s increasing sexual aggravation, Joanna will accept the next time Sarah asks her asks out on a date!"
Karyn smiled... that should teach her an enjoyable lesson! At that moment, Joan came out of the bathroom. "OK girlfriend, I'm ready," she said.
"Great Jon, let's go," Karyn replied.
"Please, call me Joan while I'm like this, I remember it's my name now that I'm a girl, Jon was only my name from before, when I was, like, a boy."
"Sure Joanna, no problem..." Karyn smiled while thinking to herself that watching this unfold was gonna be quite entertaining.
