Hey,
I just added the waking up chapter as just a different way of approaching it. It doesn't matter which one you add to as we can always adjust the story slightly to fit so go ahead and add your chapter.
And by the way from what I can tell in these posts your English is fine. I'm sure your chapter will be good. Everyone starts somewhere and I'll admit my first lot of chapters probably weren't very good but I hopefully have improved with time.
